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Entry 09 - Ill Tidings
Posted: 03 March 2008 08:36 PM   [ Ignore ]  
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Ill Tidings by Kublakhan

A 15-foot-wide spillway tunnel is carved 20 feet down a steep shoreline cliff. The manmade opening sits nearly level with the water line. The ocean rises above the lip of the entry, and thick, churning water spills out of the brick-lined doorway. Thick sludge floats on the current, and green streamers of putrid moss hang from the rounded ceiling 10 feet overhead. Water marks stain the brick walls from past high tides. An iron gate designed to bar entry into the spillway lies underwater inside the entry. The smell of rot fills the tunnel mouth, and dark crusts of fungus cling to the bricks. A thick carpet of shells washed in from the ocean fills the first 20 feet of the hallway, creating a crunching carpet on the stained stone.

[ Edited: 03 March 2008 09:35 PM by Jim Goings]
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Posted: 10 March 2008 08:50 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]  
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This was kinda cool. It definitely is an encounter. I don’t think my group has ever fought a jellyfish before and I know they wouldn’t expect it inside a dungeon. that could be cool.

The maps aren’t as good as some of the other entries, but I see where stuff is so they work.

I love Doctor Seuss too! I kept saying “Red fish, blue fish, one fish, two fish” after I read this one. That was funny!

I like this one and I think I could use it right in my game.

Good job.

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Posted: 11 March 2008 12:14 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]  
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Thanks, BindleBee, for the comments.

Yeah, I read Seuss to my girls when they were little, and the Red Fish, Blue Fish just seemed to good a line to not include in this encounter when I started writing it up and realized that it fit well with the theme.

On the maps, I didn’t want to include anything done with a professional program for fear of overstepping the limits of the contest. There was some debate in the rules about using such programs, and I decided to err on the side of hand-drawn maps with some text overlays.

Thanks again, and I’m glad you enjoyed the encounter.

Kubla Khan

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